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Kiriban - Decisions by Kohakuuu Kiriban - Decisions by Kohakuuu
"Decisions. That are the things my life is about. I used to be a pet for my master, but he builded me to a weapon. I didn't want that. So I kinda attacked him and he fled. I wanted to apologize, I just wanted to be a pet, not a murdermachine. I searched for him, but I never founded him. And then that thought came in mind. No one wanted me. No one likes me. So I don't like them. So they must not be in my way, or else they'd be killed. So I lived like that. Until.... I met her. Metsuki. She felt like I did, she was and is the only one who understands me.... And... I also learned from her. So.... I'll leave my past behind, I'm going to live with Metsuki for ever, she is the one for me.... I just know it.... Yeah..... That is my..... Decision.

WOOOOOH, a lot of text, ain't it? :'D
but ohwell, this is the kiriban for *ICanReachTheStars!
She caught my 1000 view kiriban... And I've got now almost 3000 views, so she waits already for a long time for her kiriban ;;

I had to draw Gaera for her, and I'll say...
IT WAS HARD.
FUN BUT HARD.
I just can't draw details OTL
AND.
SO MUCH BROWN.
SO.
MUCH.
BROWN.
I don't have even so much brown copics! ;-;
well yeah, now I've a bit more, but first I had only a few.
I don't really like some colours :/

And because this one is a bit old, I don't really like it anymore :/
Her right arm is weird and her lefthand is, like, waaaaay to small ;;
And she's supposed to stand on a kind-of-mountain-hill-thingie but that didn't work out really well ;;
the only thing were I'm really proud of are the clouds ;w;
Never drew clouds before, but I think it came out pretty QwQ

I hope you like *ICanReachTheStars....
even though I drew her without her bandage ;-;
I had this in my head and I really wanted to work it out!

Gaera (c) *ICanReachTheStars
Art (c) me

I hope you like, and cookie if you have read it all! :'D
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:iconlyneart12:
lyneart12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
''Yeah..... That is my..... Decisions.''

*decision

;D
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
correctedd ~
dankje c:
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ICanReachTheStars Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Gaahhhh waarom laat m'n geheugen me zo in de steeeekk;; Ik wou gisteren commenten en vergat het toen QAQ Wahhh I'm the worst;; ... de worst? Wtf XD

Amber, dit is srsly je allerbeste tekening tot nu toe! *A* De emotie en de details, de achtergrond en de coloratie.. echt zo goed QuQ Ik ben vooral onder de indruk van de wolken haha <'3 Zo fluffyyy *u*

Gahhhh nee maar srsly, ik vind m echt zo mooi ;U; Ik vind het leuk hoe je haar rode ogen hebt gegeven.. ik was al van plan ze rood te maken namelijk ehe <3 En hoe je het verhaal van Gaera & Metsuki er in verworven hebt ;U; En dat ze olie huilt haha, genius *u* Je hebt echt zoooooo veel details te pakken, respeecttttt ~

EAJIGKLBBLKJAEG DANKJE AMBERRRR ;U;
GAERA ZEGT OOK BEDANKTTT <333 Haha ;U;
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
de worst....
worst is lekker x'D

FFFF-
ME ISH ZO HAPPY THAT YOU LIKES ;W;
iedereen houd van fluffy wolken =w=b

ik ben zo blij, ik ben zo blijjj ;w;
woo, ik ben ook blij dat je de ogen leuk vind, want je vond het eerst niet heel erg leuk dat ik haar zonder blinddoek tekende ;-;
maar ik ben zo blij! ;^;
ik had dit verhaal al zowiezo heel lang in mn hoofd, eerst wou ik iets anders, ik bespaar je wel, anders komt er een comment van een kilometer lang lol
OMG, JIJ BENT DE TWEEDE DIE DE OLIE ZIET : D
//foreverhappy

DASFHAFDSLJAFSDLJ ALSJE TESSA ;w;
ALSJE GAERA x'D
Gaera was gewoon heel leuk om te tekenen ^^
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lyneart12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lemme guess, ik was de eerste die de olie zag ?? //slapped
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yushyush U_U
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ICanReachTheStars Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Haha ja he xDDD

I'm happy ur happy : D

Ah maar je hebt me overtuigd dat het leuker is zonder blinddoek op de manier zoals jij het hebt gedaan zo it's okayyy ;U;
LOL okay xD
Aww :'D Ik ben gewoon... een ninja :iconheplz:

Haha ;U;
LOL die brokiss xD
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
uhu.
vooral van unox lol

I'm happy ur happy that I am happy that you're happy ~
.....
//confused

okayyyy ;-;

NINJAAAAAAAA ~ :iconsheplz:

;v;
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|D
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lyneart12 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
RANDOM CRITIQUE FROM RANDOM BUDDEH 8D

*gaat stiekem opbouw van Tessa's groups stelen* lolno okay het is gewoon handig en zo moet je het eigenlijk ook doen V_V

ik denk niet dat ik nog meer hoef te fangirlen right ?? msn zei denk ik al meer dan genoeg |D
oja and je nice critique is half nedish of zo ( nedish= epicer dan nederlands V_V )

WHAT I LIEK:
~het is echt awesome dat ze olie huilt, I likeh, en het ziet er heel mooi uit
~one word: CLOUDS <33
~haar benen + sokken + schoenen zijn goed geluk V_V


WHAT NEED SOME IMPROVEMENT ISH ZIS:
~haar pony is een beetje... ik weet niet, het zijn echt van die blokjes, sliertjes, IK WEET HET NIET MAAR HET VOELT RAAR QAQ ( lolwat ) , probeer het meer in mooie lokken te maken =v=
~de vleugels zijn goed maar wat simpel V_V meer veren, meer details zal wss genoeg zijn om het op te lossen en echter en beter uit te laten zien 8D
~ik zie le strepen bij haar oogdoekdinghoemoetikhetnoemen. pas op met grotere stukken die je met copics moet kleuren, dat kan zoals hier strepen veroorzaken als je te langzaam bent en niet goed mengt.

zo wadaya think ??

hoop da thet helpt en dat je het goed vind ;v;
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lolol
NEDISH FTW owo

met je LIEKS ben ik alles met je mee eens, behalve haar bene + sokken + schoenen U_U

het haar, het haar, ik hou echt niet van het haar hiero >.>
en met le vleugels, me can explain.
eerst had ik GEEN IDEE hoe je in hemelsnaam vleugels moest tekenen, nu wel ;w;
het heet een blinddoek lol =w=b
indeed, ik hou niet van grote stukken kleuren OTL
de lucht lijkt er daardoor ook best raar OTL

het is een goede critique hoor ^^
en het helpt ook wel owo
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lyneart12 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NEDISH

ik vind die juist mooi V_V
okay in deze tekening heb je indeed nog dat ''benen-probleem'' zoals ik het maar even noem xD youknow, te kort aha...
maar de vorm is echt mooi en de kleuren ook ;v;

VLEUGELS HURAAAY XD

en, yeah already said that but NEDISH

ik hou van dat ''woord'' ohhhhh dat ga ik nog vaak gebruiken als je dat maar weet xD
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
NEDI- OMG PIZZAAAAA (het ruikt hier naar pizza lol (le tijd: 5 uur 's middags x'D))

okay.
...... LEGS I HATE YOU.
maar gelukkig teken ik het bovenlichaam kleiner en de benen langer dan eerst ;w;
le thank yyoouuuu ;3;

VLEUGEEELLSSS : DDDD

NEDISHH owo

.... lolwhut.
Welk woord x'D
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CatCleopatra Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012   Photographer
Ok, let's start!

Negative:
-I see some anatomical mistakes. The head seems to be a bit big for the body, and the arms seem to be very thick compared with the torso
-I miss the pupil in the eyes, which makes the eyes look a bit "dead"
-The hair seems to be one large field instead of loose hairs. This can be solved by drawing more locks of hair, or using a darker or lighter color to draw lines in the field so it will look like it' s made of loose hairs.
-I miss some shading in this drawing. Try to work more with darker and lighter colors to create shades. Now I can' t say where the light comes from.
-Why is the sky darker blue at the right? Ofcourse normally the skye isn' t one solid color: it's a bit darker and lighter at some points. But I think you should "blend" it a bit more in some way so it will progressively change into the other color (you can do this too by using more colors blue, every time you take a color which is a bit darker).

Positive:
-I really like the clouds! They are drawn very well!
-Nice composition in this drawing!
-I like the emotion on her face. Like she wants others to believe that she is fine, while in reality she is not.
-Very nice details added at her clothes

You did a good job! I hope my critique is helpful to you in some way! :iconcriticentrum:
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
aaaah, thank you for the critiquee!
and sorry for reacting so lateeee ;-;

I agree with every negative you said U_U
some thing I can explain.
with the eyes for example, I used a lot of colours of red, but I used a bit too much, and I wanted to make the pupil darker, but you can't really see that now ;-;
with the shadings, I really need more copics OTL
I also need more blue copics, I have only 1 light blue copic, that's why it looks so... weird.

and thank you for all the positives ;w;

and of course, your critique is really helpful ^^
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CatCleopatra Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012   Photographer
I' m glad you found it helpful^^
Ah, too bad the eyes didn' t came out so well=(
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It is!

Yeah, I was like: ":iconinglipplz: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
srsly, I reacted like that |D
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CatCleopatra Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012   Photographer
Oh, I haver that sometimes too!
That's why I prefer digital art x)
Easier to change things
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's pretty annoyong sometimes.
Yes, that is true, only I don't have a tablet nor SAI or something like that ;-;
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CatCleopatra Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Photographer
I understand
I use Photoshop instead of SAI
buying a tablet was the best thing I ever did 8D
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
omg.
now I want a tablet too.
I'll ask one for my birthday ~ //ispasinseptemberjarigOTL
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brantreal Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Mooi! ; 3
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
dankje! ^^
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lyneart12 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
GUESS WHO GET'S ANOTHER COOKIE >:V
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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hier is je koekje :'D
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lyneart12 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhhyeah
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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NijineMarinda Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'VE READ IT AL

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well, let's get back to normal mode

*normal, not weird mode ON*

Ohmy Amber this is pretty, as I told you already on MSN! but hey, YAY for dA's quality~

what I like the most, believe me or not, are her feet! they look really nice in perspective. I also like the colors! what skin tones do you use


english omdat het kan
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
LOL

je trakteert jezelf even op een cookie XD

yay for dA qualityyyy ~ :iconyay-plz:

you think?
le feet, me does not like very much :/
skin colors?
degene die je me aanwees bij de meet.
yushyush, egg shell, milky white en tea rose ~
veel blenden is le keyyy c:
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NijineMarinda Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooh klopt op de meet gaf ik je hints... klopt

tip: gebruik ook een lichte paarsen. lilac, als ik goed zit, in de kleinste hoekjes, zoals in haar nek en onder haar neus! het geeft een rood-achtige tint.

de voeten zijn echt goed gelukt hoor!
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lolol.

dat doe ik al, heel lichtjes paars op de donkerste plekken, het ziet er dan awesome uit owo

okay... |D
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NijineMarinda Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh okay xD
yes ikr~
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
=w=b
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Ielemientje Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Vetttttt!!!!!! De haren zijn mooi gedaan;D Ze is lief:3
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Dankje owo
ik hou niet echt van het haar :/
Maar wel bedankt ^^
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Ielemientje Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
IK VIND VAN WELLLLLLLLL HAHHHAHAHHA HAAR IS AWESOME

Np<3
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
LOLOLOL
OKAY.
IK VIND VAN NIET
:'D

;U; :heart:
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Ielemientje Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
IK WEL EN IK HEB GELIJK DURP.
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Kohakuuu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
IK NIET EN IK WEET DAT JIJ NIET ALTIJD GELIJK HEBBEN DERP.
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